You have made a good start here and you have covered what is needed. Now, you need to go through and ensure you have covered the content in enough detail and you have backed it up with evidence.
To improve: - throughout the post, you must point and proof, so make a point based on your own views on the finished advert or based on audience feedback and then show what it relates to in the advert. You should end up with lots of print screens and evidence from the questionnaire responses - link to RELEVANT sections of the BCAP code (e.g., alcohol and privacy) - read through your work to check for typos and phrasing issues - it's mostly fine but there is the odd bit you can amend.
Lois,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and you have covered what is needed. Now, you need to go through and ensure you have covered the content in enough detail and you have backed it up with evidence.
To improve:
- throughout the post, you must point and proof, so make a point based on your own views on the finished advert or based on audience feedback and then show what it relates to in the advert. You should end up with lots of print screens and evidence from the questionnaire responses
- link to RELEVANT sections of the BCAP code (e.g., alcohol and privacy)
- read through your work to check for typos and phrasing issues - it's mostly fine but there is the odd bit you can amend.
Ellie
Finished.
ReplyDeleteMuch improved - well done.
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